Subject: Bob's abstract

From: [email-masked] (D. egret)
Date: Fri, 8 Jul 94 16:44:58 +0200

Bob,

  Your abstract gives a good overview of the tools used within AstroWeb.
Do you have a title ?
  In the first paragraph, "a collection of Internet accessible resources"
might be misleading. I would suggest: "a collection of links to Internet
accessible resources" or something of the like...
  You have a duplicated "within" in the 2nd line of 3rd paragraph.

  Andre Heck and me also plan to attend this 'Mosaic and the Web' Conference
in Chicago. We have submitted an abstract proposing an overview of
the Web in astronomy and related space sciences.
  See you there !  
  Andre will also be at ADASS IV.

  Best regards
  Daniel